Chapter 1 page 10

Chapter 1 page 10
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September 16, 2015

wildcard

Looks like competition!

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September 23, 2015

toherrys

And an unbelievable(*cough*) coincidence!

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December 22, 2018

Siren

Not unbelievable at all. It merely reinforces information we were told by showing us people ARE trying to hunt down the Champion- exactly as advertised in the prologue and restated in the call to adventure.

It will also justify the Champion's wariness towards the protags, and, if they aid the Champion, could justify their willingness to trust the protagonists. These are intelligent narrative choices so good work.

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January 6, 2019

toherrys

;o; Thank you so much ♥

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December 21, 2015

Gabrielle

Your guy looks to be inspired by the main character in the animated movie Treasure planet. He sure was a looker!

(comment by a fellow comic artist)
I have some teasers on my work on Dragon Baby Productions- Facebook

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