Not unbelievable at all. It merely reinforces information we were told by showing us people ARE trying to hunt down the Champion- exactly as advertised in the prologue and restated in the call to adventure.
It will also justify the Champion's wariness towards the protags, and, if they aid the Champion, could justify their willingness to trust the protagonists. These are intelligent narrative choices so good work.
Your guy looks to be inspired by the main character in the animated movie Treasure planet. He sure was a looker!
(comment by a fellow comic artist)
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