Chapter 4 pg 16

Chapter 4 pg 16
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(pgs 15-17)
Mischief predicted this at the start of chapter 3!

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December 3, 2016

chris-tar

This reminds me of a scene from one of my all time favorite classic movies called "Time Bandits" that I saw in a theatre as a child. A group of dwarfs, who once worked for the "Supreme Being", had traveled to another place and time called "The Time of Legends". They used a stolen "map of the universe" to search for the "Fortress of Ultimate Darkness". One of the the dwarves throws a rock at what he believes is an illusory horizon, the horizon then shatters like glass, or a mirror, revealing a huge dark castle behind it. I will never forget that. It was very impressive to me as a child. You did an awesome job creating that same effect here.

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December 4, 2016

toherrys

That's great, thank you!

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January 18, 2017

numituzineru

been slow on the updates but!! hell yea that shattering effect is amazing ungh

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January 18, 2017

toherrys

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