Chapter 5 page 24

Chapter 5 page 24
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Kinetic energy's a bitch, isn't it.
Real siblings share everything, even scars :')

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March 18, 2019

dragonstudios

The art is incredible!

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March 18, 2019

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March 18, 2019

Guest

Love the sibling interaction. And hey, Inara is still in pain which means she isn't dead!

Figured Vard would get his badass scars in the flashback, but I wasn't expecting it to be quite so soon. One of the things that impresses me about Unknown Lands is the pacing (not that I don't still enjoy slower ones). Also character designs.

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March 18, 2019

toherrys

She's still gasping xD

Thank you so much!! I've been trying to give pacing more thought this chapter, so that means a lot!

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March 18, 2019

HeSerpenty

Ohhh beautiful the way you wove the flashback in with current events, Toherrys! :'O

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March 18, 2019

toherrys

Aw yes, thank you♥

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December 13, 2019

sicemera

Well thats definitely one way to lose an eye. Such a loving brother lol just got his face and eye cut out, and the first thing comes out his mouth is if shes ok? Awee

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December 20, 2019

toherrys

He does really care for her and she DID protect him so if he's hurting she's got to be hurting

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