Chapter 1 page 20

posted 16th Feb 2015, 9:22 PM

Chapter 1 page 20
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view Epiale's profile

16th Feb 2015, 9:50 PM

Epiale

Beautiful art style you have here, and I love the character designs. Can't wait to see where this goes.

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view toherrys's profile

16th Feb 2015, 11:58 PM

toherrys

Thanks so much! I'll do my best to keep things interesting.

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view quetzlsacatanango's profile

16th Feb 2015, 9:51 PM

quetzlsacatanango

This is pro!

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view toherrys's profile

16th Feb 2015, 11:59 PM

toherrys

Yay, thank you!

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view niccillustrates's profile

16th Feb 2015, 10:09 PM

niccillustrates

WHOA WHOA WHOA this is so awesome!! Nice twist with the Champion :D aah, I can't wait to read more!

Also, your action lines are nicely done UuU that's something I struggle with, so kudos!

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view toherrys's profile

17th Feb 2015, 12:00 AM

toherrys

Wooo yea! I'm glad she came out as a twist, I was going for that :3
And really? OH GOOD. Action lines turned out to be more difficult than I thought .__.

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view ourhero's profile

16th Feb 2015, 10:57 PM

ourhero

i agree. wow i am so into this

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view toherrys's profile

17th Feb 2015, 12:01 AM

toherrys

Great! Thank you!

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view Skweeee's profile

17th Feb 2015, 12:17 AM

Skweeee

Beautiful!

You must be working professionally. This is way too good to be looking at for free!!!!

You've must have done some pro work already. Have you worked on something I might be able to find???

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view toherrys's profile

17th Feb 2015, 12:40 AM

toherrys

Whoaaa thank you for the amazing compliment!
I haven't done any professional work, yet. This is practice as I gather up a portfolio to show people :3

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view chris-tar's profile

17th Feb 2015, 3:28 AM

chris-tar

Really cool effect with the trees, like they are a reverse silhouette showing the stars through their outline like that.

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view toherrys's profile

17th Feb 2015, 5:12 AM

toherrys

Cool thought! And thanks!

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view alston123's profile

17th Feb 2015, 6:48 AM

alston123

Whoa. Beautiful page. ^v^

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view toherrys's profile

17th Feb 2015, 12:36 PM

toherrys

Thank you :3

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view dougwarner59's profile

18th Feb 2015, 6:40 AM

dougwarner59

Is everyone in this comic a million times cooler that me?!!?

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view toherrys's profile

18th Feb 2015, 1:54 PM

toherrys

He he, I do hope they come off cool

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

20th Feb 2015, 3:41 AM

TheD-Wrek

Wow, amazing. I'm glad I found your art via that fan art thread. *subs * :D

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view toherrys's profile

20th Feb 2015, 4:22 AM

toherrys

I'm glad too :D Thanks!

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view FlapjackStudios's profile

21st Feb 2015, 6:06 AM

FlapjackStudios

Your comic's rad! You should put it on Justthefirstframe.com if it isn't already.

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view toherrys's profile

21st Feb 2015, 4:35 PM

toherrys

Thank you! I'll try that

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view Spelledeg's profile

25th Feb 2015, 7:21 PM

Spelledeg

There we go, all caught up! :)
Toherrys this is gorgeous, your framing is really nice and so is your use of contrasts! I'm looking forward to seeing how this adventure goes on!

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view toherrys's profile

25th Feb 2015, 10:22 PM

toherrys

Yay :D
And thank you! I hope I can deliver ^^

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view Sleeper's profile

26th Feb 2015, 6:39 AM

Sleeper

Very badass.

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view toherrys's profile

27th Feb 2015, 1:37 PM

toherrys

Goooood~ Thanks!

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view Ephemeros's profile

12th Mar 2015, 1:45 AM

Ephemeros

uahmyyy *u* lovelovelove! Can't handle the badassitude, woah. C:

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view toherrys's profile

12th Mar 2015, 2:03 AM

toherrys

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view wildcard's profile

16th Sep 2015, 9:24 PM

wildcard

Love me a good cliffhanger, though thankfully I can read on in this case! This is proving to be a very enjoyable read :)

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view toherrys's profile

23rd Sep 2015, 12:52 PM

toherrys

Really happy you're enjoying it! :D I'm loving reading thru your comments too hehe

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