Chapter 1 page 20

Chapter 1 page 20
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view Epiale's profile

February 16, 2015

Epiale

Beautiful art style you have here, and I love the character designs. Can't wait to see where this goes.

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view toherrys's profile

February 16, 2015

toherrys

Thanks so much! I'll do my best to keep things interesting.

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view quetzlsacatanango's profile

February 16, 2015

quetzlsacatanango

This is pro!

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view toherrys's profile

February 16, 2015

toherrys

Yay, thank you!

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view niccillustrates's profile

February 16, 2015

niccillustrates

WHOA WHOA WHOA this is so awesome!! Nice twist with the Champion :D aah, I can't wait to read more!

Also, your action lines are nicely done UuU that's something I struggle with, so kudos!

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view toherrys's profile

February 17, 2015

toherrys

Wooo yea! I'm glad she came out as a twist, I was going for that :3
And really? OH GOOD. Action lines turned out to be more difficult than I thought .__.

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view ourhero's profile

February 16, 2015

ourhero

i agree. wow i am so into this

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view toherrys's profile

February 17, 2015

toherrys

Great! Thank you!

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view Skweeee's profile

February 17, 2015

Skweeee

Beautiful!

You must be working professionally. This is way too good to be looking at for free!!!!

You've must have done some pro work already. Have you worked on something I might be able to find???

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view toherrys's profile

February 17, 2015

toherrys

Whoaaa thank you for the amazing compliment!
I haven't done any professional work, yet. This is practice as I gather up a portfolio to show people :3

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view chris-tar's profile

February 17, 2015

chris-tar

Really cool effect with the trees, like they are a reverse silhouette showing the stars through their outline like that.

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view toherrys's profile

February 17, 2015

toherrys

Cool thought! And thanks!

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view alston123's profile

February 17, 2015

alston123

Whoa. Beautiful page. ^v^

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view toherrys's profile

February 17, 2015

toherrys

Thank you :3

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view dougwarner59's profile

February 18, 2015

dougwarner59

Is everyone in this comic a million times cooler that me?!!?

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view toherrys's profile

February 18, 2015

toherrys

He he, I do hope they come off cool

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

February 20, 2015

TheD-Wrek

Wow, amazing. I'm glad I found your art via that fan art thread. *subs * :D

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view toherrys's profile

February 20, 2015

toherrys

I'm glad too :D Thanks!

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view FlapjackStudios's profile

February 21, 2015

FlapjackStudios

Your comic's rad! You should put it on Justthefirstframe.com if it isn't already.

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view toherrys's profile

February 21, 2015

toherrys

Thank you! I'll try that

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view Spelledeg's profile

February 25, 2015

Spelledeg

There we go, all caught up! :)
Toherrys this is gorgeous, your framing is really nice and so is your use of contrasts! I'm looking forward to seeing how this adventure goes on!

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view toherrys's profile

February 25, 2015

toherrys

Yay :D
And thank you! I hope I can deliver ^^

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view Sleeper's profile

February 26, 2015

Sleeper

Very badass.

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view toherrys's profile

February 27, 2015

toherrys

Goooood~ Thanks!

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view Ephemeros's profile

March 12, 2015

Ephemeros

uahmyyy *u* lovelovelove! Can't handle the badassitude, woah. C:

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view toherrys's profile

March 12, 2015

toherrys

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view wildcard's profile

September 16, 2015

wildcard

Love me a good cliffhanger, though thankfully I can read on in this case! This is proving to be a very enjoyable read :)

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view toherrys's profile

September 23, 2015

toherrys

Really happy you're enjoying it! :D I'm loving reading thru your comments too hehe

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