Chapter 2 pages 5-6

posted 30th Mar 2015, 6:50 AM

Chapter 2 pages 5-6
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view toherrys's profile

30th Mar 2015, 6:50 AM

toherrys

Good luck navigating these panels, hehe. Start with the top triangle and end in the bottom triangle, everything else is meant to happen simultaneously. Just... follow the speechbubbles.

Next up - Vard vs the Champion!

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view Epiale's profile

30th Mar 2015, 7:02 AM

Epiale

Oh wow, awesome page! Seriously, I love the way you laid out the panels. It's dynamic, and get's across how quickly/simultaneously things are happening really really well.

Also they're both so badass, I love them, haha.

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view toherrys's profile

30th Mar 2015, 10:06 AM

toherrys

Oh good, I was hoping for that! And I'm so happy you love these two xD

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view rufiangel's profile

30th Mar 2015, 7:16 AM

rufiangel

Oh shnaaaaps, that was terrifying and awesome. >_>

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view toherrys's profile

30th Mar 2015, 10:07 AM

toherrys

;D Goooood~ These two are meant to come off as a bit scary.
And thanks!

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view HeSerpenty's profile

30th Mar 2015, 7:53 AM

HeSerpenty

Hot dayum this was awesome X'D

I think the panel layout here is brilliant to illustrate these things happening simultaneously! *takes notes* >__>

(I'mjustgonnasayitIthinkMischiefisreallyhotandgoodluckreadingthis<33lolol)

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30th Mar 2015, 10:12 AM

toherrys

Yay! And I'm so glad the panels are working out.

(andMischiefisarealcharmerjustwaitandseemwahaha)

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view TheD-Wrek's profile

30th Mar 2015, 8:16 AM

TheD-Wrek

Man, that was amazing. That bottom center panel is the perfect touch. Well done! :D

P.S.- Gonna send you your pic tomorrow! :D

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view toherrys's profile

30th Mar 2015, 10:13 AM

toherrys

Fantastic, thank you!

And ooh can't wait :D

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view ProfEtheric's profile

30th Mar 2015, 10:39 AM

ProfEtheric

Oh my stars and garters... This is quite honestly one of the best designed pages I have ever seen (though it's technically two pages). Brilliant!

Inara and Mischief are truly masters of badass-fu. :)

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30th Mar 2015, 11:41 AM

toherrys

Wow thanks so much! I was worried the layout would be too confusing.
(Hehe stars and garters. Suddenly I want to read some X-Men...)

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view HapyCow's profile

30th Mar 2015, 1:43 PM

HapyCow

Daaaamn this page is so good! Mischief is so damn scary! Well..so is Inara..but did Mischief blow deadly smoke into that dude's mouth?! what even is that?!

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view toherrys's profile

30th Mar 2015, 4:39 PM

toherrys

Hehe, yup yup. He's a bit of a dick. Little puff of magical toxins to choke the guy and destroy his body from within "8D"

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view Chris the Blue's profile

30th Mar 2015, 6:31 PM

Chris the Blue

Those guys are so COOL!

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view toherrys's profile

30th Mar 2015, 10:02 PM

toherrys

Awww yeah! \o/

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view GabbyGood's profile

30th Mar 2015, 7:16 PM

GabbyGood

WHEW. A bit big for my screen resolution but DAMN like Mischief and Inara are my heroes.

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view toherrys's profile

30th Mar 2015, 10:07 PM

toherrys

Hehe yea I figured it wouldn't suit everyone but I really didn't wanna go smaller (I tried, it looked teeeerrible oh jeez) :D
And also WOO for heroes! ^^

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view alston123's profile

30th Mar 2015, 10:07 PM

alston123

Oh snap! This is one of the most dynamic pieces I have seen on comicfury. Nice action sequence. *0*

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view toherrys's profile

31st Mar 2015, 12:00 AM

toherrys

Ooohh wow thank you!!

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view niccillustrates's profile

30th Mar 2015, 10:20 PM

niccillustrates

This just keeps getting more bad-ass!! *u* & your action poses/lines continue to amaze me!! Nice panel layout, too!

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view toherrys's profile

31st Mar 2015, 12:01 AM

toherrys

Yaaaaay thank you! I hope I can keep it up!

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view Donkaccino's profile

31st Mar 2015, 4:53 AM

Donkaccino

Damn! Such detail!!
Amazing, amazing, amazing! :D

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view toherrys's profile

31st Mar 2015, 12:56 PM

toherrys

Thank you thank you thank you! :D

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view craybest's profile

31st Mar 2015, 7:27 PM

craybest

amazing comic! just found it.
I do have personal issues with the violence, but that's just me. The comic is wonderfully made, congratulations!

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view toherrys's profile

31st Mar 2015, 8:31 PM

toherrys

Thanks so much!
Although, if you're sensitive to violence I'm not sure if this is the best comic for you :/ I've flagged this for violence and there will be quite a lot of it, so fair warning!

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view craybest's profile

31st Mar 2015, 8:41 PM

craybest

thanks for the warning, the art quality makes up for it so I'll still enjoy it :D

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view toherrys's profile

31st Mar 2015, 8:45 PM

toherrys

Wooo yeah! :D Glad you're staying on board!

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view Skweeee's profile

31st Mar 2015, 9:00 PM

Skweeee

Magnificent page, Toherrys!!!

Also, I want 'bad breath' superpowers too.

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view toherrys's profile

1st Apr 2015, 2:08 AM

toherrys

Thank yooouu!

I would suggest brushing your teeth daily... with like, orc guts. That should do it :D

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view squidlifecrisis's profile

7th Apr 2015, 2:57 AM

squidlifecrisis

hey! yes, I think I'll keep up with this comic! I'm curious about the unknowns--mainly what kind of subculture has developed around their being hunted. (also Kai. Kai is my favorite so far :'D)

I noticed in the page of the guy eating the heart though--that's pretty big for a human-sized heart. Check out some cadaver photos, our hearts are so little it's kinda unsettling! :o

but like I said on the forums, I love how you draw faces. Your inking job is amazing, too ;v; looking forward to more!

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view toherrys's profile

7th Apr 2015, 3:46 AM

toherrys

Woo!
Their culture will shine through our two friends here, but we'll also properly dive into it later on~
(and yay I'm so glad you like Kai xD/)

And thanks for the tip, love! I checked out your DA and anatomy really seems to be a passion for you :D

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view Damatris's profile

18th Apr 2015, 2:51 PM

Damatris

This is brilliant layout! .*___*.

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view toherrys's profile

20th Apr 2015, 1:15 AM

toherrys

8DD Successss *woo* Thank you!

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view wildcard's profile

16th Sep 2015, 9:33 PM

wildcard

Clever layout indeed, I had no trouble navigating for what it's worth :)

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view toherrys's profile

23rd Sep 2015, 12:58 PM

toherrys

That's great!

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view Neonfluzzycat's profile

25th May 2016, 7:05 AM

Neonfluzzycat

these guys are so badass i love them already

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view toherrys's profile

25th May 2016, 1:32 PM

toherrys

Woop, so glad you do 8D

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