Chapter 2 page 8

Chapter 2 page 8
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view toherrys's profile

Lot of good that shield did.

Only two pages this time! I'll get back to work on the rest~>

Also WHOA WHOA over 100 subscribers THANK YOU <3

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view chris-tar's profile

April 27, 2015

chris-tar

That gauntlet shield is AWESOME!
What did she do?
Rupture an artery!?!

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view toherrys's profile

April 27, 2015

toherrys

Great!
And nnnope those would be his bones shattering.

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view chris-tar's profile

April 27, 2015

chris-tar

Whoa! Then he's FuQued!

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April 27, 2015

chris-tar

May I suggest that you make the bones an off-white or yellowish white color then to better help establish that those are bones?
If you don't have time for that, then just tell me to go to hell.

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April 27, 2015

toherrys

Thanks for the suggestion, but I did have them "bone colored" at first and decided it didn't have the right look. I trust readers to understand by the crack marks that those are bones, not veins :)
If not, then Vard is literally going to say what happened in the very next panel.

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view squidlifecrisis's profile

May 1, 2015

squidlifecrisis

It took me a minute, but I got it. All those shards ain't gonna stay in place for very long, though!

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view toherrys's profile

May 1, 2015

toherrys

Great!
And no they are not, here's to hoping someone can patch him up and soon.

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view MadJak91's profile

April 27, 2015

MadJak91

Ouch! I have this weird feeling when looking at x-ray shots or shattering bones.
Also, this comic is utmost badassery :D

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view toherrys's profile

April 27, 2015

toherrys

You shoulda seen me shudder when I googled ref images for this. I ended up just looking at healthy bones xD;
And woo thanks!

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view Epiale's profile

April 27, 2015

Epiale

Ouch, that's gotta hurt! I like the x-ray view there, and love the expressions. :)

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view toherrys's profile

April 27, 2015

toherrys

Thanks a bunch!

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view alston123's profile

April 27, 2015

alston123

Talk about a person who leaps before they think. :P

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view toherrys's profile

April 27, 2015

toherrys

Nah, she's already thought about the most important things like which bones to break and limbs to sever... :D

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view alston123's profile

April 27, 2015

alston123

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view zartala's profile

April 27, 2015

zartala

I can't even begin to imagine how much that's got to hurt.

Also your art is so very, very lovely. It is really inspiring to look at your amazing art! XD

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view toherrys's profile

April 27, 2015

toherrys

Let's hope his adrenaline kicks in!

And aaaawww... thank you ;___;

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view rufiangel's profile

April 27, 2015

rufiangel

Fight first, talk later? XD;;; Dang, love the update toherrys, the action is so slick! <3 And that gauntlet, ooooh, that's cool XD <3

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April 27, 2015

toherrys

It's not like they'd have anything interesting to say anyway, right? :DD

And thanks so much! I'm super glad people are liking Vard's gauntlet shield thing :3

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view iddqd's profile

April 27, 2015

iddqd

Great fight scenes, a real pleasure to watch.

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view toherrys's profile

April 27, 2015

toherrys

Oh good, thank you!

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view gideonland's profile

April 28, 2015

gideonland

The leader of the team, a shattered forearm this early in? There's gotta be something else to it, Vard has more tricks up his sleeve... I hope.
Wonderful art, as always.

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view toherrys's profile

April 28, 2015

toherrys

You would think, right? :D And thank you<3

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view Skweeee's profile

April 29, 2015

Skweeee

I like how you got the idea across that his arm is broken with just one picture.

I think if she wanted to kill him, he'd already be dead... I think.

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view toherrys's profile

April 29, 2015

toherrys

Thanks! I'm glad that x-ray bubble thing is working out.

That might've been her initial plan, but now he chipped her knife so first he's gotta suffeeeerrr

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view Elysium Bliss's profile

May 8, 2015

Elysium Bliss

I seriously cannot find any words to effectively describe just how utterly outstanding this title is! Imaginative, beautiful and deadly. A fantastical world of limitless potential with artwork to drool over. Simply amazing.

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view toherrys's profile

May 8, 2015

toherrys

Oh wow *_* Thank you!

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view Elysium Bliss's profile

May 9, 2015

Elysium Bliss

Thank you actually. For captivating my imagination!

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view dougwarner59's profile

May 8, 2015

dougwarner59

great looking page but I had no idea what was going on with breaking bones in the arm until you explained it to Chris-tar; the off colors used for the bone and arm really makes it hard for my primitive brain to make the connection.

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May 8, 2015

toherrys

That's odd, because I showed that panel around and asked people (and had them pass it along and ask others) what they thought was happening in the little bubble and literally everyone instantly said "bones breaking".
I'm testing out different colors for it but I really want to keep the x-ray thing :D

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view toherrys's profile

May 10, 2015

toherrys

Changed the colors, is it any better?

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view Damatris's profile

May 10, 2015

Damatris

OWWW! That was one hard punch to shatter both bones like that. D:

Gotta love the feeling of movement in those bottom-most panels. <3

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view toherrys's profile

May 10, 2015

toherrys

Yeh, she packs a wallop :D And magic helps.
And yay I'm so happy the panels don't seem stagnant :3

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view chris-tar's profile

May 29, 2015

chris-tar

Changing the flesh in his arm to a bluish color helped me register the bones better for some reason.

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May 29, 2015

toherrys

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