Chapter 2 page 18

posted 26th Jun 2015, 8:26 AM

Chapter 2 page 18
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26th Jun 2015, 8:26 AM

toherrys

(pgs 16-18)
...I'd go with the elves.

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26th Jun 2015, 8:48 AM

the_quiller

Kinda like asking a mass murderer to help you stop illegal logging?

Yeah, something's amiss with that logic. Call it a hunch, but I think the severed heads all over the place should be a sign that you made a wrong turn somewhere on the road of life XD

I'm so glad this updated with three more gorgeous pages that I'm going to gawk at like a fool now.

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26th Jun 2015, 12:29 PM

toherrys

Hahaha that's an accurate comparison!
The heads could indeed be taken as hints to maybe NOT trust these guys too much...

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view lirvilas's profile

26th Jun 2015, 9:10 AM

lirvilas

Toherrys:

Badass as always! I'm sure there's much, much more to the elves, those pointy-eared fiends...

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26th Jun 2015, 12:30 PM

toherrys

Thank ya!
Iiii... might have left a few details unsaid about those elves...

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view shinka's profile

26th Jun 2015, 10:02 AM

shinka

nice work :)

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26th Jun 2015, 12:30 PM

toherrys

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view CiciEnixa's profile

26th Jun 2015, 12:11 PM

CiciEnixa

This is some rather interesting development right here. I really love seeing your work, tis gorgeous <3 I have trouble reading the font sometimes, though, specially when the elf names were mentioned, because there's not much kerning. That's my only nitpick, though, don't mind me~ XD

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view toherrys's profile

26th Jun 2015, 12:34 PM

toherrys

Wohoo thank you!
Aahh yes, the font is on my list of "shit to fix" :D The uneven spacing bothers me too and ALSO how commas and periods look the same D: But I went through _so_many_ fonts until I found one that looked "right" so I just went with it haha aaargh

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27th Jun 2015, 8:12 AM

Rd Ashes

Wowsers, this page looks like it would make an amazing cover.
What a beautiful piece of art.
*jealous*

Quick note, IF you find places where the kerning (spaces between your letters) is uneven, and it particularly bugs you, you can manually fix it.
Put your curser where you want to change the spacing and use "control" (I think) and your forward or back arrow keys to move the letters around.

I do it all of the time, but I could be wrong on what keys I use.
If you'd like to know at some point and that doesn't work, PM me and I'll give you the right way to do it. ;-)

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27th Jun 2015, 1:54 PM

toherrys

Thank you! :3

And ooohh thanks for the tip! (it turned out to be alt+arrow keys :D) Gonna fix some points and update these pages now mwaha

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26th Jun 2015, 4:59 PM

MadJak91

Is she really considering taking that head as a trophy? :D

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view toherrys's profile

26th Jun 2015, 8:36 PM

toherrys

Hehe nah she won't. Although Mischief might think it'd be funny to shrink the head or something :D

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26th Jun 2015, 5:39 PM

iddqd

That was an incredibly smooth transition between the scenes.

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view toherrys's profile

26th Jun 2015, 8:36 PM

toherrys

Woo yea, thank you!

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view rufiangel's profile

26th Jun 2015, 5:49 PM

rufiangel

Oh shnapps >____>

This is going somewhere really engrossing, Toherrys! Can't wait to see how it all pans out! X3

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view toherrys's profile

26th Jun 2015, 8:41 PM

toherrys

Aw yeah, so glad you're intrigued! >.<

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view mosske's profile

26th Jun 2015, 9:33 PM

mosske

Got the day off of work and these were waiting once I got home THIS IS THE BEST DAY EVER

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view toherrys's profile

26th Jun 2015, 11:39 PM

toherrys

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view gideonland's profile

26th Jun 2015, 10:05 PM

gideonland

Dope! Very well pace in these three pages, giving some away but not too much; make people want more. The unknowns are clearly a bit psycho, and THIS is the best option for help? Ha. The elves must be even more psycho. Lots of fun ahead.
And great art, of course. I love a great looking book, but also love when art can take a backseat for great story telling.

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26th Jun 2015, 11:52 PM

toherrys

Thank you! I'm glad if the pacing works.
I guess your options run low when the traditionally wise protectors become the enemy, hehe. Need to resort to unconventional methods.

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view alston123's profile

27th Jun 2015, 1:06 AM

alston123

Man, you certainly are a master at storytelling. You tied that in very nicely.
Those two are so great, just as they are. I love this page. The disassembled bodies laying around...should disgust me, but they're so beautifully rendered that I just wanna say, this page is so pretty. *_*

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view toherrys's profile

27th Jun 2015, 2:53 AM

toherrys

Hahaha I love this comment, thank you so much!
I've been worried over my storytelling so I'm really happy it's working ;_;

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view Centcomm's profile

27th Jun 2015, 4:00 AM

Centcomm

Very nicely done.. I hadn't checked this out before due to time constraints .. but very very nice work.

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view toherrys's profile

27th Jun 2015, 1:58 PM

toherrys

Thanks! I'm glad you came to check it out ^^

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view GabbyGood's profile

27th Jun 2015, 8:02 AM

GabbyGood

Ahahahah brilliant. I love the looks on their faces. Also watching you work on this was awesome!!
I'm so excited to see what else happens *_*

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view toherrys's profile

27th Jun 2015, 2:22 PM

toherrys

Haha watching me fumble around with these :D And thank you! >.<

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1st Jul 2015, 6:02 AM

niccillustrates

OH. MY. GOSH. This just keeps getting more and more interesting *u* Love all of your designs, of course! And all the personalities are so great playing against each other.

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view toherrys's profile

1st Jul 2015, 12:22 PM

toherrys

Yaay, thank you so much!
A few pages still to go in this chapter, then we can put away the weapons for a brief moment :D

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view wildcard's profile

16th Sep 2015, 9:47 PM

wildcard

They look pretty damned wicked on this page. If I saw them on the street it's pretty safe to say I'd cross the road!

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view toherrys's profile

23rd Sep 2015, 1:06 PM

toherrys

Hah, yea I might do that too

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