Chapter 3 pg 28

posted 31st Dec 2015, 5:32 AM

Chapter 3 pg 28
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31st Dec 2015, 5:32 AM

toherrys

Oh come on, Vard. He's just trying to be nice.

Changed the pacing of the next scene a bit, so only one page this time.

Hope everyone has a great New Year's!

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31st Dec 2015, 6:21 AM

Shirokuro

Those expressions are kust priceless OMG! xD

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31st Dec 2015, 4:29 PM

toherrys

Haha thanks!

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31st Dec 2015, 6:45 AM

mosske

jfc vard that wink

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31st Dec 2015, 4:29 PM

toherrys

Bwahaha, this wins #1 comment

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31st Dec 2015, 7:07 AM

chris-tar

Mischief will seduce Vard if it is the last thing he ever does by Crikey.

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31st Dec 2015, 4:30 PM

toherrys

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31st Dec 2015, 8:24 AM

Twistedfro

Oh Mischief...how can ya not love him :-)

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31st Dec 2015, 4:31 PM

toherrys

You're gonna have to ask Vard hehe :D

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31st Dec 2015, 4:57 PM

sigpig

The (unseen) thought-bubble in the last panel reads...

"Douche."

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1st Jan 2016, 1:52 AM

toherrys

Hehehe oh yes.

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31st Dec 2015, 9:03 PM

alston123

Hehe. The thirst though. :P

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1st Jan 2016, 1:53 AM

toherrys

The thirst is always there >.>

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1st Jan 2016, 8:36 PM

Alexk

I absolutely love the way the panels segue into one another. It's so smooth and natural and supports the joke on the page so well. The violetish background color and the lack of dialogue were excellent choices for this page, by the way: they really bring the right atmosphere to it.

You still draw expressions breathtakingly well and even though I haven't mentioned it earlier you also use the characters' body language to support the story-telling and their characteristics superbly. Even though it sometimes feels like the characters have a somewhat limited range of poses, some of the poses you do use (like Mischief's in the second to last panel) are refreshing in their rareness in comics (and obviously fit the character well - that pose feels very "Mischief-like" and I don't actually think any other characters to have used it in this comic yet) and are more than likely more challenging to draw than I can comprehend. It says a lot that you can still pull them off - kudos!

TL;DR: This is probably my favorite page in this comic. It's pretty much perfect.

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4th Jan 2016, 4:36 AM

toherrys

Thank you so much I'm really glad if the panels work, I had to work them over a couple times.

And haha I had to redraw Mischief's pose maybe 5 times, it shouldn't have been that hard! So I'm really happy you like it and find it "Mischief-like", because it really is pretty specific to him.

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9th Feb 2016, 3:51 AM

T_Deines

"No, I actually didn't want this lit."

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9th Feb 2016, 4:09 AM

toherrys

"I just like to chew at the end of it."

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11th Jun 2016, 3:09 PM

Damatris

I approve of this use of fire powers a lot more. xD

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21st Jun 2016, 4:24 PM

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