Short introduction to this world and its history

I love the fairytale stained glass explanation. It's so beautiful~!

So, three pages in and I'm subscribing. This comic's Art, presentation, and story look incredibly promising. Sign me up.

The imagery here is really great, carries an appropriate sense of history and mystique. Love it.

Best to add commas in run on sentances.

Love the art, colors, text,everything seems professional, great introduction